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Is This A Good Story Plot?


Im thinking of writing a story about a girl that becomes possessed by a poltergeist, the poltergeist possessed her because he envied her and thought she was beautiful. But later on when the girl finally figures out shes possessed she loves the poltergeist too. Later when they figure they loves each other the girl agrees to find a way the poltergeist can come back to life.

  • amyba- why does EVERYTHING sound like twilight?? uhhh. this doesn’t sound like twilight.
    interesting idea, but one problem, a poltergeist in a violent ghost. it’s like it can throw objects at you for your harm. so, it doesn’t really fit well.
    how about a ghost that haunts her? not possess her because that would mean taking over her in whole. her mind and body. she wouldn’t know she was possessed.
    … sorry. i kinda sounded like a jerk.

  • Whoa, that’s really interesting! If it was in the bookshelves, I would certainly read it. I hope to read more of it!

  • sounds a little like Twilight to me… interesting though

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