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	<title>Comments on: I&#8217;m Trying To Write A Book&#8230; Need Some Help?</title>
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		<title>By: Dectuncoore</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dectuncoore</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Feb 2010 01:43:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: D</title>
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		<dc:creator>D</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Jan 2010 14:53:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>you really shouldn&#039;t worry so much about &quot;offending&quot; people, its your story, if they can&#039;t handle it they shouldn&#039;t read it.
I also like the plot, but its a little boring. I think you shouldn&#039;t be afraid to make the relationship between this girl and this boy somewhat perverse (at least to him) and don&#039;t shy away from the dark side of writing. I think this could be a great story if you added a little something extra.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>you really shouldn&#8217;t worry so much about &#8220;offending&#8221; people, its your story, if they can&#8217;t handle it they shouldn&#8217;t read it.<br />
I also like the plot, but its a little boring. I think you shouldn&#8217;t be afraid to make the relationship between this girl and this boy somewhat perverse (at least to him) and don&#8217;t shy away from the dark side of writing. I think this could be a great story if you added a little something extra.</p>
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		<title>By: Lika</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lika</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Jan 2010 09:30:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>1. You can say to your readers that Heather was one of the inspirations for the character in your story , but any fact of life that is similar to the late actress&#039;s is coincidental .</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>1. You can say to your readers that Heather was one of the inspirations for the character in your story , but any fact of life that is similar to the late actress&#8217;s is coincidental .</p>
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		<title>By: Tormente</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tormente</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Jan 2010 09:07:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>my husband was a fan of her work too :) i dont think its offensive. and if people do, o well its your story. i like the concept and would be interested in reading it. also i for her to play the role of a messiah is different and refreshing. i like the conflict. i think this story has massive potential. and i think that she would almost have to be &quot;in love with him&quot;from a child&#039;s prospective anyway, it would further connect them together and progress the story along smoother. id love to here  more :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>my husband was a fan of her work too <img src='http://monster-legends.info/paranormal/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  i dont think its offensive. and if people do, o well its your story. i like the concept and would be interested in reading it. also i for her to play the role of a messiah is different and refreshing. i like the conflict. i think this story has massive potential. and i think that she would almost have to be &#8220;in love with him&#8221;from a child&#8217;s prospective anyway, it would further connect them together and progress the story along smoother. id love to here  more <img src='http://monster-legends.info/paranormal/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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