Comments on: I Need Help. Plz Suggest More Murder Scenes For The Book Im Writing!?

By: Dakota

Dakota — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 20:58:42 +0000

Standing by a window at night to have a person pop up and shoot u.

By: Rachel Z

Rachel Z — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 19:16:49 +0000

Try watching Harper’s Island. Its a show about a killer on an island and many many people get killed. It may give you some ideas.

By: PAtriotf

PAtriotf — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 16:05:44 +0000

One kids arms are tied to separate ropes and then pulled away by 4 separate cars pulling the student into 4 pieces.

By: Aoibhnea

Aoibhnea — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 13:28:26 +0000

You’ve listed a lot of horrific ways to die. I’ll add a couple more and maybe you can think of an idea around them:-
Buried alive
Burning with fire
Burning with acid
Skinned alive
Macabre Makeover – Puncture (forks in) eyeballs & cut the person’s ‘smile’ with a sharp knife til it reaches the ears. Then behead.
Here’s a great page with really weird ways to die. Scroll down to ‘Middle Ages’ and start there for inspiration. The first one’s aren’t so great…http://www.bspcn.com/2008/12/27/list-of-…
ORhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_unu…
Here are some samples:-
“who poured molten silver in his eyes, ears, and throat.”
“wrapped him in a rug and had him trampled to death by his horses.”
“having a red-hot iron inserted into his anus.”
“partially roasted body was eaten by six of his fellow rebels, who had been starved for a week beforehand.”
“a broken lancetip which pierced his eye and entered his brain.”
“the king who ate himself to death.” – force-feeding
those pages may give you some inspiration…..

By: Joan

Joan — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 12:40:42 +0000

i think you should make the story with a little twist, lets say that the killer was actually one of the students they didn’t know was missing, and he/she was getting payback for something… what do you think??

By: Ahlia

Ahlia — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 06:49:40 +0000

I think ones that involve the school are good, (like the Drowned in the school’s pool and the drowned in the girls’ bathroom sink ones are great)
So I think you should come up with more like that- the others find one jammed in a locker or something haha.
Hope that helped.